light in the dark?

http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/8521/floowwing2.jpg
C&C please ;D

Not inlove with it >.< I can't see the render, it's kind of small. The thing in the middle of the sig, I don't know what it is or why your have it as a focal.

The C4D in the center does indeed take away from the focal.
(I'm assuming you intended the render to be the focal point)

the render is stuffed away to the left side, leaving the right a little bit to open for my taste.

my advice would be to remove the c4d in the center and to try your hand at some other effects.

all in all, i think i can see what you where going for, but it didnt quite work out.
just keep it up ;)