Hellgate sign

hellow, my first signature i show here in public, just made it yesterday. I'm quite noob in this, but i would like to know youre reactions. I was seaking after a render with nice flow and came up to a great one from hellgate, ok the render picks more than 2/3 of the canvas, but coulnt do a thing about it. Hopefully i havent distroyed the beauty of the render, so CnC are very welcome :p
http://a.imageshack.us/img576/7550/hellgate.png

Thats quite good, though a question ,what the hell is the blue and green thing, and why is it there? Oh and you mispealt zombies ;)

I like it, but that blue draws my attention away from the amazingness of the sig itself.

wth youre right, stopid of me :p didnt know what to do with the text, so deletet it sometimes, probably thats why the mistake( or otherwise my english isnt that good) :p
And that blue thing :p i know when i used a random chosen effect c4d there appeared some smaller blue color, at first didnt like it, but afterwards it broke a bit the monotone colors :p so maked it a bit more visible, but ok isnt necerary...

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Originally Posted by AbOsTiT

hellow, my first signature i show here in public, just made it yesterday. I'm quite noob in this, but i would like to know youre reactions. I was seaking after a render with nice flow and came up to a great one from hellgate, ok the render picks more than 2/3 of the canvas, but coulnt do a thing about it. Hopefully i havent distroyed the beauty of the render, so CnC are very welcome :p
http://a.imageshack.us/img576/7550/hellgate.png

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Umm it's pretty dark and has a bigg problem with lighting. That blue spot is pretty random and it seems pretty over contrasted. And its pretty hard to make out what the text is. You got the flow down though. This sig has plenty of potential though.

As said above, you did get flow, and flow is rather important, and one of the two things i need to work on :)

yes that blue/green ruins it and if u blurred the zombies it wouldbe better imo

its far to dark and dull, it needs better lighting. Make the lighting around your focal point.