grimjow sig

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132/kdogx1/grim.png
cnc and a few tips would be handy :D

i would firstly erase that letters that are on low opacity on his shirt near his hand.
needs a bit more lighting imo.try playing a bit with contrast&brightness.

i like it alot !:P more than the other with chaotic focals :P

i just noticed the writing on his shirt XD
yeah this one is less chaotic xD
i shall try to work on lighting and contrast
thanks :D

Not bad, a little monotone for my tastes but thats just a taste thing. Your execution is very good and it's clean too. Nice job with the effects and flow.

thanks :D
it is a quite monotone if i must admit but thats my style really :D

Try and get out your smudge tool and smudge the letters out, or get xelo or someone to do it - xelo is good at that

Great Concept, But you dropped a few eyecatching points;)

At first: This Sig needs some light! Use Dots, Dodge tool, Adjustment Layers. Create that sparkly Focal.
The Background is a little boring, when you use a render, make a bg with the render it self, or a stock. Blur the bg to make the focal even more eyecatching, Don't use Plain Bg's ;)
And at last: The text should be on a different spot, probably against 1 side of a C4D. I'd rather use simple white/black text to keep it as less attracting.

Good Job anyways