http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...k/sigknife.png
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i dont like the splatter that cover the whole focal.
erase the splatters from the body and right top corner imo
The splatter isn't really on the focal, except maybe his arm a bit.
it looks like that tho :P
Text position could be improved, and the background destroys the flow
Thanks for the CnC. Another revision:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1.../sigknife3.png
looks alot less hectic :) For some reason i don't like it, but i'm really not sure why
i like the splatters and i thinkt he text is in an alright postion , just remove somew of them from its face , you removes too many on your v2 imo
v3 is nice too (:
O dear, Flatty again with his Long Cnc's, Hide!
When you place a render like this, there's a must of flow. Too be honest, there isn't much of a flow in it.
The bg draws all the attention because it's brighter as the focal, Try to avoid that.
The splatters could be used in a positive way, they were just placed incorrectly
KIU mate
