somewhat abstract tag? CNC please...:)

http://i978.photobucket.com/albums/a...hick2sig-1.png

Try some tuts

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Originally Posted by Delite

Try some tuts

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oh thanks for this wonderful criticism.... you know i dont read tuts at all i just do stuff like this just playing around with my software.....:p

sersiously though, just explain why you say "try some tuts"?
i guess its that bad?

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Originally Posted by SuFi B A M F513

oh thanks for this wonderful criticism.... you know i dont read tuts at all i just do stuff like this just playing around with my software.....:p

sersiously though, just explain why you say "try some tuts"?

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Your effects are too solid.
Are you using photoshop or Gimp?

I like it.
Hot/cold thing going on?
nice work! Who is that a render of?

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Originally Posted by JoshK

I like it.
Hot/cold thing going on?
nice work! Who is that a render of?

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thanks!
i really dont know who the girl is i just seen the render and thought it was hot... :rolleyes:

not showing enough of the render or stock your using colors don't fi well with this piece either id recommend going back in your psd and messing with some better colors and showing u focal point allot better and work on your lighting and your flow right now your flow is all over the place kiu m8

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Originally Posted by sirenzo

not showing enough of the render or stock your using colors don't fi well with this piece either id recommend going back in your psd and messing with some better colors and showing u focal point allot better and work on your lighting and your flow right now your flow is all over the place kiu m8

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thanks for the comment, i will go back and play around with color and opacity, however i was going for something at little on edge of no flow, i like flow, its nice i can do it but i want to get good at pieces that just look crazy, but still has some order, you know the there is order in chaos theory :p also i may just try this again but i will use the whole render instead of just her face. Thanks again guys :)

Josh is right the colour idea (hot/cold) is a cool thing to keep in mind but Siren was right as well to play with the lighting/effects more...

I think the length doesn't need to be this long with what you wish to show off and try to make your focal the most "pop" in the sig, so bring that bitch back up to the front of the class and the other effects will work better :D

Edit: the text is pretty nice where it is and youve done a good job not making it too flashie :D