gift for joshk

http://a.imageshack.us/img27/6434/joshkcombat.png
hope u like it bro cnc are welcome as well :)
http://a.imageshack.us/img202/8938/joshkk.png

Your sweet Siren!! :D

Blur the c4d a little and I think you have it lined up pretty good with the render.

Even tho the text is off to the side I do like it and what you did with it it's not too dramatic so it's not like "WOW look at that super important corner!"

ok how bout now slave ? i think i blured a little too much lol

move your text more to focal and make it visible

Dayum! Nice work! I like it! Sweet effects!
What font is that for the "joshK"?

Thanks man

Np bro glad u like it m8 and as for font haha im have to open the tag back up in cs4 to find out for u later :)

Text is too far from the focal, the tag could also be cropped a bit. None of the lighting appears to be interacting with the focal either. Effects are great though

the text not meant to be seen just the focal point and i think i pulled that off tx sirius for cnc and yes i agree lighting could be better but he likes it :) if he want me to make changes on it later i will .

sirenzo, check your Pm's when you get a chance, thanks again for the sig!

Second one looks better, text could be improved