Personally, I like it. You've got a real opportunity for some depth to the right there, if you were to blur that a little bit. I'd try putting the text above that line though. Pretty nice overall. =]
09-07-2010, 06:32 AM
limpouros
everything that zen said, tho i wouldnt mind the text being there
09-07-2010, 12:47 PM
TRUeLM
Right, so a little more bluring. Relocation of the text (or removal) heh...
I'll try it out.
09-07-2010, 01:11 PM
DR809
Noo don't blur the red thing it looks off.
I think what zen meant was to blur the backround and some of the splatter fadding out. You don't want the splatter as blured as the bg though. A lot less blurred as if you were looking from something afar and it was getting closer.
09-07-2010, 01:11 PM
DR809
Noo don't blur the red thing it looks off.
I think what zen meant was to blur the backround and some of the splatter fadding out. You don't want the splatter as blured as the bg though. A lot less blurred as if you were looking from something afar and it was getting closer.
09-07-2010, 01:15 PM
TRUeLM
Hmm...okay.
Will try.
09-07-2010, 01:23 PM
silent_assasin
DR is right, as much as hes posted it :P
09-07-2010, 01:44 PM
excellence
i would get rid of the border, the text, the pen tool line, and some of that blur, its too strong, only keep some of that blur...try that out
09-07-2010, 03:27 PM
Checkerz
i wouldnt say take the pen tool line out, but maybe take some off the ends. like erase it so it doesnt go throught the entire sig. also, when you blurred the red thing on the right, you left a little part still sharpened by the line.
i would also say lower the text just a little, blur the bottom of the scarf just a tad, and leave the red thing on the right the way it was in the first sig.