Shangry

New Piece:)
CnC!

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http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/q...08/Musicv2.png

text is harsh to see u have to squint your eyes to see it over there bad placement imo um your lighting looks like it's working , um your c4d effect might be a tad too much but thats just me . i see u lost a hand in it . but over all I'm have to say B/W is best not really digging your one in color sry bro . kiu tho you can make wicked tags I've seen them but this just not one of em . ttyl ps sry left this out where u erased the c4d's? by his waist line seems a little flat try smoothing that out more . k peace out man hope my cnc helps some if not well sry i tried .

Thanks siren, really helped bro. I'll make a v2 if I can. Also, i modeled this of of Kri's kanye piece, just kinda jazzed it up lol
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nps man glad i could be of some help :) can't wait to see your updates ttyl m8

I like it it but there is no luv yet :P

Hi left arm ( the pink shat writting on his hoodie) kinda makes it look very flat :/ but I see that colour helps you bring in the pink below him. I would say try an change the colour on his hood if you could or make it less flat somehow ( sry have no tips I don't often work on rl renders : /)

nice job!
Good flow, and effects.
Stuck with the same colors and gave it a nice look
KIU

Thanks Josh!
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