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I think it would be interesting to see how it looks if you darken the left eyebrow. Looks kind of weird as gray. The effect under the eye looks kind of choppy compared to how smooth everything else is.
Seconding Monroe's post.
I'd rotate the text to go with the angled flow of the eyes. Good colors, and the effects are pretty neat. Feels a little unfinished though.
ok will clean it up later but right now im tired as hell haha just spent hrs on this tag and also spent like 5 lol adding more to my noob wall ahahah and still not all of em yet :)