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It looks rather empty, it just looks like you got a render, put it on a background, blurred the background, and put a tiny little C4D on it. It needs more done to it. Also that text is pretty bad, and you dont need to put your name on everything, the position of your name on this is terrible. Other then that, its ok. KIU