Strange

i did one for a request
and he wanted sumthin sstrange so i tried sumthin different(im glad i did)
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/57/srequest1.png

got sum tips to make this better?

Looks a bit to over blurred to me.and i would make the face stand out a bit more.
but the light is good and the way he looks at it is awsoem.