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C&C Please.
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I'm not really opposed to centered focals, however, I don't think it's working here, I'd move everything over to the side. Colors need work too, that weird purple spot over your stocks head doesn't really fit all that well. Overall, it's decent but needs some more work.
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It looks as though you slapped a render onto a background duplicated the render and did some smudging. Blend it in a little more Make the background work with the render as well. Move the render away from the center and add some c4d effects.
I would say the smudge above her head needs to go, I think if your going to keep her centered in the center you would do better to make her larger :)
kiu <3
