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It's that C4D again, i think it's toodark, try the dodge tool. And the lighting on this is a bit random, so you could do with a light source
bit too crowded for my taste and hard to see your focal point try giving u focal a light source to bring it out and add in some effects and erase some of your bg or smudge it in flatter
The effects are overwhelming the focal.
The focal itself is over sharpened. The lighting feels weird and the text is hardly legible.
Keep working at it bro.
psd nao .-.
im sorry but i dont really know what im ment to be looking at because the c4d is taking over the whole sig :/ you dont need c4d to make a good sig. try usings some tutorials without c4d and you will see its not all about c4ds lol hope this critisism helps :D