Fading Away - DR809's recent tag

Made this in my last battle with Bogui, Sirenzo, and TrueLm. Opinions?
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/7805/fadingaway.png

Believe there's too much going on. Try adding a little more depth into the smudging and such around her, and it will be nice. Not a fan of the text, but I'm never a fan of text lol. Not a bad tag though bud.

lol the battle hasn't ended yet putz :)

lol i know :P

It has for me @_@ I'm totally getting the crap beat out of me by everyone :D

I think its great though, imo not everything should be simple.

lol i only got 2 votes i posted wrong coppy i think because i dont recall the face being so blurry :(

Well, your's is still really good anyways. Your +2 is looking better than my 0 right about now :P

guys can we please not get off topic here =/

u right dr sry bro u got a sweet looking tag good use of slave render m8 kiu

Thanks bro.