pen tool fail

it sucks >.<
i wass thinking let's draw a manga but it sucks :D

http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/...204802-520.png


haha:p

hehe, nice. I would suggest basing a drawing off of shapes that are used in manga, the square head idk about it looks odd. The neck is a bit large also. Keep goin with it. Use paths so you can adjust and alter sizes of parts. Post a followup version if you do anymore with this one.

looks good and i would keep on practicing it more and you will get better

perhaps draw something in hand first and then pentool it it will help you a loong way :) its always hard to just pentool right away :) I like to have some sort of base layer where i draw my shapes from :) try smoothing out the shapes to, don't make then to rought :) and then just practise practise practise :) bet pet have some good advice :)