Music Smudge

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9532/musicy.png

another smudge :D

-Moved from "Tutorials" to "Showcase"-

oh crap sorry about that rad :/

CnC btw guys

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I don't think the clipping mask on the left fits in there, but other then that nice smudge kiu. :)

The render looks choppy.

The dupe of his face isn't needed.

There are lots of over contrasted area's that you need to tone down.
Colors are really wild. You got white, black, blue, red, orange.

White and black aren't colors, but you know what I mean.

It's a complex style, but no affence, it doesn't really work. Try to stick to more simple things.

Keep at it, ^u^.

Horribly cut render. It could be blended a lot better. There's not a whole lot of flow going on here. Nice try though.