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CnC please.
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Eh, it's not bad. But you could do more to it.
- Burn the sides to give it more contrast, especially the yellow.
- The brushes on the right need some adjustments, some of them ruin your flow, I'm hoping you can tell which one's.
- Your text needs work, I say just don't add it, but it's always good to attempt getting better at it.
- The render looks slightly choppy and blurred. Whatever you did to it, undo it.
- You should incorporate some more purple in there.
- Border should be black.
Hopefully that list helps, keep at it!