Noble 6

I thought I'd have a go at something different. Never tried anything like this so I dont know if I done it right.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...hin/noble6.png


Edited version:

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...n/noble6v2.png

It's very plain, the flow is messy and the border is too thick.

I don't really see anything else wrong with it, except those three major things.
Keep it up!

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Originally Posted by Cross Projection

I thought I'd have a go at something different. Never tried anything like this so I dont know if I done it right.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...hin/noble6.png

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I think the border colour needs to be a bit more solid in my opinion. It just looks odd how it's partially see-through. The diagonal line through the visor also breaks the sig up a bit. It draws attention away from the focal area. The other thing is you've spaced it out quite a fair way. On one side you have the soldier, on the other your text. Try in future to bring them closer so the viewer doesn't have to shift their vision from one side to the other.

Really, it's just a few placement things and some minor details, other then that I think it's pretty good. Background effects somewhat suit the character, colours are smooth and it's pretty clean. :)

Nice work Nads. ;)

I took everything into account and fixed it :)

I see a good sign but there are enough failures, first under more than 1 px is ugly, then these brushes are not well applied, missing details of fusion, cleaning, and more work .. the idea is good .. continues to work brother.

Sister...