oli. After 1 year break on ps :D

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7287/olivere.jpg
please dont be hard on me :s i do not remember how to get everything together, forgot almost everything after 1 year break.
my texting sucks , i know ^^ i just over made it 4 times.. and gave up .
cnc :S

It's a little crowded and has tons of crazy effects going on. I like it though, next time just make the focal more distinguishable, he looks like a c4d lol.

i agree :)
i just wanted to remember how to use efects, so puted all kinda wierd stuff on it.
i just have to practise a bit more, and gonna be ok.
thank you foryour coment!

c4d's ftw

Ket is a C4D whore, don't listen to him.

i love c4d :D but dont call me a whore ^^

think its a little over c4d éd indeed :P
as furbz said next time make the focal more visable.
kiu :D

thank you :)
ill try get better, just its hard to even make something work, when u dont know where witch tool is :d
i asked furbz like for eveything " where was smudge tool? " " how can i stroke this " "how to do this"
:D so its just 1st try to remember stuff :)

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Originally Posted by Linda

" how can i stroke this"

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That's what she said.

Lol, First thing is the light source is off. You should make it come from like the bottom middle. To me the colors seem a little off also. They all sort of match but don't really blend well together. The text colors and text are bleh, they need to be worked on a lot. :P. Also the left corner is way too empty. Need to keep a balance. Never for get balance. Its pretty nice for just coming back Linda, keep it up.