Condemned.2nd Try after 1 year break.

and here is my 2nd noob try.
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6494/condemned.jpg

i know its messy.. just couldnt get it cleaner, i took out alot of stuff, and it was empty.
please o please dont be hard on me xD

p.s Thanks to Slave, for nice render, i got from her share.

Top right corner is pretty barren. The tag is a bit bland as well. Text fits pretty nicely and doesn't draw attention, but the entire tag is kind of like that. Not to much going on.

yeah , its not my best for sure :)
ill get it right with time,
thanks for ur comment!

Hm, the colors look very good. The effects are pretty nice.

One thing you seem to do is make your light sources too strong. They are suppose to look natural, lower the opacity a lot. Also I think you have it (light source) misplaced IMO it should be coming more from the center left top. Hm, I would also try and blend the text in some, it stands out too much. Just grab the text layer and lower the opacity, thats all you really need to do. One more thing try and use the black spot in the right, its too empty it kind of kills the sig a little IMO. One more thing, try and keep some flow to your sig, it has a lot of potential for flow but a few things take it off track :P.

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Hm, the colors look very good. The effects are pretty nice.

One thing you seem to do is make your light sources too strong. They are suppose to look natural, lower the opacity a lot. Also I think you have it (light source) misplaced IMO it should be coming more from the center left top. Hm, I would also try and blend the text in some, it stands out too much. Just grab the text layer and lower the opacity, thats all you really need to do. One more thing try and use the black spot in the right, its too empty it kind of kills the sig a little IMO. One more thing, try and keep some flow to your sig, it has a lot of potential for flow but a few things take it off track :P.

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this but you also want to develop a background most of the time. this would help with that blandness. Also if you want you might want to try to use a motion blur or Gaussian to give the light sourse a more natural feeling.

Yeah the flow is all sorts of off. Might want to check here for a flow tut.

Text could be blended in a bit better. Effects are nice would be nice if they were a little cleaner but overall it's a solid well done signature.dKeep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more works from you.^^

I love this, though text is a bit dodgy

thanks guys :D like in 1 min so much coments, i got bit lost.
i will work on this tmr, try to make v2 aswell :)
ill try improve flow, light source that is pain in a** , text and ofc use of background,
thanks guys, love you for cnc :)

tbh it wouldnt look bad if you just got rid of the text and the light source. then crop it.