Business Card

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That's my second design of business card and this time its for me I have tried to keep it simple as possible and I have used as few colours as possible. I am not sure if it will be printed soon but I am hoping to print them in future...

Hope you guys like it and I would love to see some feedback and advice as I am still beginner when it comes to printed designs

hmm im not so sure about the font, if you look at the backside of it its abit messy :\

not sure about the font but like the rest

You know, all this randomness going on creates a sense of cofusion, there is no proper alignment and the designs look random again. The back of the card, the font's too big and its unnatural to put all that info there (though not impossible). There is no need to underline graphic design, because again it looks random and detached from the rest of the info. I am sorry to tell you this but in my honest opinion, last one was a lot better than this one.
I would recommend this article ---> http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2010...d-preparation/
and here this might brighten you up ---> http://designinformer.com/basics-business-card-design/
Try to keep everything simple. you're going overboard with adding stuff. Also print this stuff and it fails, really. You need to consider lots of things when it comes to making a print design.

Hmm thanks for the links will help out alot the design I was trying to get here is kind messy but technical as in the letters are technical I was not trying to make it easy to read but more eye catching and to suit the graphic design industry which technical drawings for me really symbolise that... Of course there is still alot to work on as its only my 2 business card and I have no experience in printing what so ever...

Thanks for the feedback...

Edit: Thread bumped by the guy above^, not meh xD

As much as I like the unique design I must agree with the chaps above^ I would say keep the background style but change the font to something more basic, also remove the wireframes from behind the text - its a nice idea but doesn't work to well.

This is an old topic mate, don't bump it.

and I totally didn't change my post thanks to Rad pointing out that this topic is 1.5 years old.

Please don't bump 1,5 year old threads, the OP has not logged on for over a year.