This was mostly a try on getting better lighting since I normally suck at that (Not that this piece is actually better) . I also redownloaded Topaz since I couldn't live without it any day longer. ;)
im really begining to hate this render lol it looks like a floating head in all your tags who used it :P colors seem funny but it's great composistion u was going for kiu m8
11-06-2010, 04:31 AM
Applejuice
Thanks sir. As I said, all comments appreciated. What about the colors?
11-06-2010, 04:43 AM
Gaaf
I like it, but i would remove the yellow on her hair
and the text Drag me to, and make more of the "Hell"text :P
and you have a lot of black space u might wanna fill that up
kiu man :)
11-06-2010, 04:47 AM
Applejuice
@Gaaf
Thank you, I think I will remove "Drag me to" and make "Hell" bigger and such. I will also make the yellow less bright.
11-06-2010, 04:48 AM
niko0487
its nice,
only thing i dislike is the yellow lightning source at her ear.
and Drag me to is a bit hard to read.
11-06-2010, 04:50 AM
Applejuice
Yah, I just saw that I can't change the text. I will do something about the yellow light.
11-06-2010, 05:53 AM
Linda
Lovely colours ! totaly love them , and ur lightening gets better for sure, tho u should add mroe light coming from the top, on the face :) [ like not really on it, but next to it so its gives light tio her face a bit ]
text is nice, but sad that hell text is hard to see, maybe move cliping mask more, so the other L letter would be more easy to see,
left side is bit empty :( tho.
try add more depth!
11-06-2010, 07:26 AM
Applejuice
Hell text is behind a cloudy something. more depth won't work and how should I fill up the black?
11-06-2010, 08:08 AM
Fork
You can try adding textures to the black and such to try to fill it up. I'd almost find a space stock or something and work it in there.