:Spartan: God Of War

This really did fail:

http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/2549/godofwarj.png

cnc please

Version 2:

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1637/godofwarp.png

Needs better text and more intensity with the colors but the BG and fx look nice.
And you should lose the fx under his chin ;)

flow looks awesome in this tag bro but you effects are dull would like to see them brighter and shinny :P gj thoe m8 kiu

The colors need more contrast and you should start to develop more contrasted shades, so a slight variation of red within your background.

I don't believe the text is necessary, it'll look fine without it.
I don't see many discrete effects, most of them blend within the background itself.
More work on contrast and better FX.

Keep at it.

spartan colors I do not like something is not quite like in the signature and is not it .. render this right .. depth effects are good but there is something you do not complete the job

I'll work on a V2

@Joey, this is pretty highley contrasted
@draghen, this is a stock, not a render

v1 ;)
i love the efects but i think the left side is bit empty, so text should be there, to fill it up :)
add some more light resources, maybe try to burn and dodge some places ;)

Very nice!