prototype shiv's render ;d

http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/7508/prototype2w.png
thanks for the render shiv :D
not my greatest for sure
but i havn't posted any sigs recently imo
cnc :)

i think ujust did a better job using this render out of any one on this site honestly

bu the blending think could use some work and it feels a tad too sharpen m8 iterresting with the eyes on the lef but im not diggig your text there i almost didnt even see it . colors seem to go pretty good thoe
light source look pretty good for most part but was a bit hard to see where it was coming from got some good depth . the hole right side of the tag looks like culd be blended in with a smudge tool or smthing . keep some of the effects ,

text is friggin hard to read.
but rest is okay.
i dont like that white space between the render's head and the c4d..

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Originally Posted by sirenzo

i think ujust did a better job using this render out of any one on this site honestly

bu the blending think could use some work and it feels a tad too sharpen m8 iterresting with the eyes on the lef but im not diggig your text there i almost didnt even see it . colors seem to go pretty good thoe
light source look pretty good for most part but was a bit hard to see where it was coming from got some good depth . the hole right side of the tag looks like culd be blended in with a smudge tool or smthing . keep some of the effects ,

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thanks XD
yh the right side of thetag is empty i do agree with you
and the text is hard to read , but i don't like my text being noticed :)

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Originally Posted by niko0487

text is friggin hard to read.
but rest is okay.
i dont like that white space between the render's head and the c4d..

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text is hard to read
that's not ac4d , it's from the render
but i see your point

well mybad.
its really distracting.
try copy a part from something samelooking and erase edges with soft round =]

ps; i like it. its just eyecatching.

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Originally Posted by niko0487

well mybad.
its really distracting.
try copy a part from something samelooking and erase edges with soft round =]

ps; i like it. its just eyecatching.

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thanks dude :) i shall try and get round to it sometime

other then that,try to make the red glowing thing brighter.
so it pops out more ^.^
no hate just givin' my ideas on how you MIGHT improve it.:)

all good except the part of the eyes that this up killing the charm of the document .. I would remove the eyes look and would leave one stock and render

Looks pretty tight, except for the eyes in the back ground. Overall, Great Work!:)

Yeah I find the eyes kind of distracting, other than that I think it's awesome :]