Specnaz.Soilder

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Your CnC please

Arent they named Spetznaz?

The text dosent really fit in i think and the right sides c4d is abit to mutch maybe use something abit more subtle.

I like the style though simple and clean.

Erase some of the red....

Text could be bit better, but i love ur efects ;)
depth and lights works ,, awesome, c4d forever ^^ love em, but next time try add a bit of the c4d efect on the focal aswell, so it would creat a flow ;)
Nice work there!

Dude I love it :D
Could you please PM me the render link you used?
I can't seem to find it anywhere ):

Looks good, could use a little C4D on the other side around the focal maybe, just to even out all the C4D you have on the right.
Nice job :]

It doesn't really look like you erased the C4D on the right, it's too distracting. Also, just to create stronger depth and flow add a small C4D in front of him, near the bottom.
I'd remove the text, just doesn't look right.

I personally hate under contrast, but everybody has different opinions on that.

Depth is nice and focal is clear.
Next time add stronger saturation, contrast and more use of media.

Oh yes, just a suggestion, the border looks fine atm, but I think a 1 px all around this piece would be more suitable.

Good work mate ^u^!