V1
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...xx-d32u3c0.png
V2
http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/6306/nero.png
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in my opinion
the colours look washed out
and the undercont look sorta kills it
and i'm not a fan of the text
but
good flow
and nice effects
Necro, there's no point in telling you anymore that your under contrasted style doesn't look good.
Many other people have said the same, it looks as if you don't take it into consideration or even acknowledge it.
The effects are nice and they flow with the signature well.
Text just looks slapped on, try to mix it up and make it look better, with contrast text looks better as well.
Keep it up ^u^.
totally agree with Joey and Ketg
updated
bump
Dude, it's been an hour, you're supposed to bump after a day.
Blending on the second one is better, but I don't see a major improvement :/.