Rate it pls

Could some1 rate these sigs? :)

http://i54.tinypic.com/102r18y.jpg

7/10
3/10

6/10 cant see the focal much looks over sharpened in places and lacks depth text is okay well blended but i feal that the red swirl takes your eye off the focal and is really distracting but good BG work

4/10 dont really like the render it looks a tad stretched but i love the text and i also feel you could add more depth with this one also

really caotic no focal point color are all over place.

Some pretty good work. You could really improve on render placement and sizing though.

yeah thanks for giving me advice, i'm trying to improve ^^