Hey guys long time since i actually submitted anything.
I know this looks quite unfinished but i am too bored and too eager to finish it hahah. As long as people tell me whats missing i will keep editing it. So Critiques are most welcome :D
Concept was. What happens if colors can change the way you live? What happens when colors invade you colorless life?
One more thing is that i have an uncalibarated lcd. So the colors might be too vibrant or less vibrant. Sorry for that. Pls tell how it looks
i think it looks awesome
not sure what else you could add
11-21-2010, 10:30 AM
Gaaf
This is totaly awsomeness........... :D
11-21-2010, 12:17 PM
(-)Ion
crop it, make it a white background, work more with the the colors
11-21-2010, 11:00 PM
KidBuu
white background doesnt work anyways with what i thought of sorry, not taking that into consideration.
Thanks for the feedback guys :)
11-22-2010, 02:11 AM
(-)Ion
technically it would actually fit the concept still abstractly. white being a neutral, colorless, with your colored splashes. That is a side point though.
The main point I wished to make is that the current background you have does not look good at all with what you've done with the person and effects. You have a background stock, and you have effects. There is nothing binding the two together, especially due to the lack of attention paid to looking at where light, contrasts, color tones, exc match up with each other relative to either the bg or the foreground.
Changing to a white bg would be a much improved starting point to begin working on this as it is really looking unfinished. You'll get a better result. Even now a white bg would look better as a finished product. Or scrap the entire thing and find new resources to work with.
Either way. Just things to watch out for in the future
11-22-2010, 04:58 AM
KidBuu
you are telling me what i already know. I also mentioned that this might look unfinished but i am too bored to finish it now. And also i have an uncalibrated lcd, thats why not getting proper tones. I actually am not able to make out the faults that is why posted here. I will adjust the tones but not the bg.
