god of war

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No comments I'll post :D

Not your greatest work my friend. The render is not cool, you have it centered which would be alright with me if it was a good one, or if maybe the bg was diff coloured, cause atm it seems too blended and not really seeing any great detail to pull my eye for interest.

The text in this case doesn't work well and the colours for the top feel not right becuase of all the blue/black you have.

My suggestion to you if you wish to keep this render is to try out soem diff bg and colours becuase atm it's just too dark an no real light source to make me wow :)

gj tho I know you have good talent )

Thanks slave

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Originally Posted by Slave

No comments I'll post :D

Not your greatest work my friend. The render is not cool, you have it centered which would be alright with me if it was a good one, or if maybe the bg was diff coloured, cause atm it seems too blended and not really seeing any great detail to pull my eye for interest.

The text in this case doesn't work well and the colours for the top feel not right becuase of all the blue/black you have.

My suggestion to you if you wish to keep this render is to try out soem diff bg and colours becuase atm it's just too dark an no real light source to make me wow :)

gj tho I know you have good talent )

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Covers it all, The render pretty much made it hard to work with.