26 views and now one told me anything let me know if it sucks damnit
11-23-2010, 01:34 AM
|Sky
The colours and lighting are good.
The only problem is the text, doesn't fit.
11-23-2010, 02:39 AM
cC.DOMINO™
Remove the text, or make it better font. The right side has a faint vertical line that could be blended better. I think you might have smudged too much of the render away on the lower right side. I get what you are going for on this one tho. Some of the lighting effects are a little too blurry, and the colors on lower right side are like a hue of purple and there is no purple on the render or anywhere else. The main focal seems to be the shoulder instead of the eyes and hand. its too blurry on the face part of the guy. I would suggest adding new render or just working on the current one and blending the choppy edges a little bit. It's not bad for being away from ps for a bit. You will be back in no time Oath. kiu
11-23-2010, 02:43 AM
Benni Black
im feeling it *rubs on screen* hmm text isnt fitting well
other then that nicee!
11-23-2010, 09:48 AM
+s9.Oath
Thanks I'm workin on text and yeah I fixed that line just haven't uploaded it yet I'll keep at this one till I like it more lol thanks for the advice guys I need it lol
11-23-2010, 10:08 AM
Downfall
text just needs fixing i really love the smudge can you send me some of your brush settings please in pm ^.^
11-24-2010, 11:37 AM
+s9.Oath
LoL yeah uKing I'll send u the one I used on this one
11-24-2010, 11:40 AM
sirenzo
you have an area that needs to be blended in more bro i think was a stock used because i see the edges on it , on the right side . of the tag
11-24-2010, 11:41 AM
Downfall
also oath i noticed you can see the line on the right where you did the clipping mask about 10pixels out from the edge