v2. from rofl

http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/...685106-160.png

i think this is better :D

still missing the effects dude...
i only see some smudging. stry add some splatters and stuff
also i would try to place the text closer to his head
kiu :D

All you added was halfassed text. Fits the rest of the sig I guess.

I like both monochrome but the idea is good

i added filters a c4d and some gradients

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All you added was halfassed text.

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No need to be a smart ass.

As stated above, it stills needs work, more effects should be placed on the left and the C4D stands out too much.

Keep workin' at it mate.

still looks empty and 1/3 of a way completed bro keep working on effects and try moving the render more

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Originally Posted by Joey x

No need to be a smart ass.

As stated above, it stills needs work, more effects should be placed on the left and the C4D stands out too much.

Keep workin' at it mate.

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Im really getting tired of you coming at me.

Im a tough critique. Hop off my sack, please.

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Im a tough critique. Hop off my sack, please.

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Saying "All you added was halfassed text." isn't benefiting him in anyway.

It's basically saying "Your text sucks".
How does that help?

IMO
your text placement could be better , maybe try moving it to the top of the sig , in the same place ?
also you added a c4d on the right side
you want to be adding more on the left side
because it still seems quite empty
but i sorta liek these colours :)