new one

I really think this is my best (didn't make many though)
Let me know what you think of it.

http://i54.tinypic.com/10xwys7.jpg

v2:
http://i56.tinypic.com/2mx34t1.jpg

id try smoothing out some your effects a bit and maybe also make new layer then image apply image as is with out text and try using burn tool on soft brush at 45 pix and try add in depth around your focal. and then maybe add a photo filter
new layer be a box like [] at the bottom right where u layers are at

heres a quick tut i made to discribe what i mean gl hope it helps you out
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/5777/tutfornoobs.png

Added a v2 is this better?