Crowpool concept

had a weird idea with two renders, admittedly the outcome wasnt great but cnc

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3669/crowman.png

19 views and no cnc come on guys

You're bumping after 3 hours?

Anyways,
the color scheme is a bit weird and monotone for me.
It seems like you've mixed two different styles in this piece.

On the right, you have a developing grunge style and it feels clean to the left.
You might want to work on your composition.

The text could better as well. Try experimenting with that some more.
Good work, it's nice to see you trying new ideas and concepts.

okay thanks mate