ahaha missed the entry o well

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6719/sotwb.png

would have been my real entry lol

It looks really low quality, mate.
The flow is great though.
Lighting seems off as well, I can't really determine a proper light source here.
I'm not a fan of the effects either and your background could be better.

Those are my complaints, the rest seems fine.

Good work bud!

as just messing with something diffrent and yea it did get a bit lq thanx m8