http://i.imgur.com/X3SJH.png
Have at it ^^
Printable View
http://i.imgur.com/X3SJH.png
Have at it ^^
Not liking the text personally. Neither placement nor font really does it for me. Possibly look at PaPa's txt tutorial on this forum or look out another somewhere else.
Possilibly put a black Cinematic border on to contrast against the bright white top and bottom. Even if u try it nd decide u don't like it it's worth a like in cos u can always scrap it ^^
Like the colours nd how u've meshed them together cleanly. However i'd like to see a bit more effect are the render itself not just on the top and bottom.
Keep up the good work though :) You can only get better with time ^^
Thanks ^^
V3 http://i.imgur.com/diFqt.png
w/ Kanji only http://i.imgur.com/RVkqg.png
No text http://i.imgur.com/qhmIZ.png