True Beauty

K, first attempt at anything in years, let me know what you guys think, pls be honest lol.

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The orange splat with text isn't placed well, it takes away focus from the girl.

Imo the background texture is too visible and the center-piece needs more depth. Maybe add shading/lighting or sharpen/blur.

The composition isn't really there to be honest. THe splatter is clashing too much and in terms of its arrangement and color and some look as though its just overtaking. I think you would have been better off using red and the yellowish color, the white for me ruined it. I think the typography is a bit poor in terms of its reflection. Reflect it normally. I do like how you positioned the focal but the spalltter really isn't working.


Keep at it nonetheless.

Thanks guys, I didn't think it was very good either, I'm sure it will come back eventually.