Jay-z

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CnC Please

Great show!

I think you need a little more light or more going on in the left top side, it feels liek dead space there after looking at your great light colours everywhere else.

I think you might need to fix up your c4d a little too, it feels too sharpened or too textured. Either one it's an easy fix :D If you already shapened it just go to edit than "fade sharpen" if you havent done that blur it a little and if it's too blury for the effect your going for go ahead na do the same thing I just suggested for your shapen.

Really like where this is going KIU, I'm really impressed with this style !!!

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Originally Posted by Slave

Great show!

I think you need a little more light or more going on in the left top side, it feels liek dead space there after looking at your great light colours everywhere else.

I think you might need to fix up your c4d a little too, it feels too sharpened or too textured. Either one it's an easy fix :D If you already shapened it just go to edit than "fade sharpen" if you havent done that blur it a little and if it's too blury for the effect your going for go ahead na do the same thing I just suggested for your shapen.

Really like where this is going KIU, I'm really impressed with this style !!!

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I use gimp
Let me find the fade sharpen option...
its around here somewhere