Sensual

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CnC appreciated as always

The clipping mask at the front is a bit distracting as well as the text.
They can both go, imo.

The signature overall needs more contrast and stronger colors.
It also needs better lighting as well. It looks a bit slapped on to me, work on that a bit more.

Experiment with curves for better contrast and lighting results.

The signature could have some more outstanding effects to it as well. Nothing really catches my attention and it seems quite flat.

A signature that has great potential. Keep working at it mate ^.o

hmmmm ok i see wht ur saying joey ty for comments will see wht i can come up with

any more for any more?

Remove the text, its to sharp and it doesnt go with this concept.
As said before, there is no depth.
and the effects kinda all go in a difrent flow, also it looks a bit undercontrasted to me :(
Not a big fan of it m8 :(, i have seen better from you fo sho!
kiu :D