HCl - Slave's render

http://i783.photobucket.com/albums/yy116/amf04/HCl.png

Thanks slave for the render. CnC please. Gonna post v2 later

its nice, but it looks like u over smudged her face o.o
for me it looks bit unfinished,
misses light source, bit more depth :s
text isnt bad at all :)
bit too much empty space in the right .
Keep up the great work!

yeah. i just noticed the face after i posted it. i'll post v2 later. ill still add gradients and more

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Originally Posted by ejbonagua

yeah. i just noticed the face after i posted it. i'll post v2 later. ill still add gradients and more

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try adding a color too... it's a bit monotone as it is. good job so far man!

v2.
http://i783.photobucket.com/albums/y...mf04/HClv2.png

cnc on v2 please. :D