First big peice ever

http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/5396/bigthing.jpg

CoC please

Be gentle loll

I like it, but you should have cropped it a bit to maintain focus.

http://i.imgur.com/Kj9Kv.jpg

Like this there's a better focus on the subject and there's direction. Your view moves from the bottom to the top. It also removes the blue/purple clouds on the left-middle and the empty space at the bottom. Which I felt took away from the quality of the rest of the piece.

really nice work there.

I think you really overdid the splatters and it ruins the 'dreamy' type of atmosphere you've created with the clouds and transparent legs.

It's really nice otherwise :).

Yeah i see what you mean with the cropping and the splatters

looks a lot better without the empty space

thanks guys