Drunk

http://deushost.com/i/f7GbEj.png
I like it I guess.

nothing?

the bg is inconsistent which is fucking wierd o.0
and the c4d up front looks terrible

i like it; good lighting and dept. but i have the same concerns as gfxdub
1. BG on the left doesn't match with BG on right.
2. that c4d covering the neck bothers me, mainly because the left shoulder left uncovered. i would bring it down lower and to the right

KIU

eh the stock looks like it was cut with a broke wheel mouse and the renders are kinda just sitting on top with no blending..kinda looks thrown together

The c4d is randomly placed, doesn't flow or match or mix or anything.
The render is choppy, looks bad quality.
The BG C4D's don't mix, the blurring in the background doesn't match as it is only on one side, and too strong. The tatoos on his arm look like they were drawn in paint.
The text is too close to the border, and just doesn't fit.
Kiu.

Jesus Christ it's a c4d on the right damnn not the bg. Repititve record o

Just trying to help you. Your not in any position to be disregarding help.