The Passion of a Dancer

http://ntsd-applejuice.deviantart.co...ncer-189907196
Im going to link because it will most likely stretch the page. and please click full size, it lookst way better.

i luv it, good work apple. you certainly like the dance themes. kiu lighting is pleasant, and the effects aren't too whored, it works ok for me.

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Originally Posted by DOMINO™

i luv it, good work apple. you certainly like the dance themes. kiu lighting is pleasant, and the effects aren't too whored, it works ok for me.

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Thanks alot for comment, I indeed love dance themes. :D any things I could improve?

Amazing good effects nice lighting. i have got anything negative to say about it
GJ and KIU

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Originally Posted by Tay X

Amazing good effects nice lighting. i have got anything negative to say about it
GJ and KIU

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lol were you going for the word 'nothing' there? Else I would love to hear what I could improve.
Thanks for your comment!

Personally I don't like the black frame, it's a bit too big in proportion to your piece. Maybe the right hand is over-contrasted?

i find it kind of cluttered, like there is a little to much going on around her feet and her right hand, but thats just my opinion and im a noob and dont know anything, so there. GJ and KIU, i like it :)

It's a very nice piece.

The Lens flare and the circle that it makes dead center of the page is very distracting for me. I also agreee with checks that there seems too be a lot going on around her feet and left shoulder.
One other thing. I don't like the smear brush thats behind her right. It seems off on this collection of effecs.

KIU apple good stuff :F