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12-19-2010, 12:40 PM
Ma12auder
Yeah it gets kinda hard to name the topics after the 5th post lol
I like the beveled, metallic style you got going on there but it seems a little choppy. Theres a lot of empty space on the left that could be used with a different placement of your render. Also try to blend the render in with the background a bit more next time. But good job and keep it up :D
12-19-2010, 12:40 PM
fadedone
font ruins this..needs more depth and the render blending sub par...
12-19-2010, 02:06 PM
Slave
I think you did some good effects on the text but maybe try and use soemthing more simple so as to better read it ( you can also play with the smooth/sharp/crisp to get diff effect out of the more traditional fonts.)
Another good idea to do with this one is to place the center of your c4d behind your focal so as not to make two focal points. This would also pull ones eye to your render instead of off your render.
One more thing to suggest here, you might wanna try putting a c4d or fractal or soemthing running across your render to give it depth. ( not over the face ofc 'cause you don't wanna make your focal look messy) Or better yet erase/layer mask/ blend your render into your bg around soem of the edges so it doesn't feel too flat.