[Prototype]

http://i53.tinypic.com/zmktvq.png No name

http://i51.tinypic.com/9zun0n.png Name CnC

Too much noise.....or is that wind effect?

Colours are great though. KIU :D

There is way too much contrast on the left side in comparison to the left, therefore you have very weak composition.

Your effects, lighting, text and depth are all poor.
I advise you read up on some more tutorials to help you get a start on those.

Good luck and keep it up!