Kritez: Green Lantern

Something a bit different... more topaz than my usual... thats what yall like right????

http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/3...enlanternp.jpg

CnC welcomed, I know the text is silly..

Sig is epic! Tex... not so much, sorry. Too complex text

lol it looks pretty dam good acctualy kritez
;p nice flow m8 gj

hmmm it looks overdone to me. there is to much going on wich makes the focal disapear into the effects. even the bg looks a bit to crowded imo. the execution of it all is the Kritez standard witch is top as usual! text fits nice, but is difficult to read.

the effects are very nice , as usual
the body and the fist look really awkward to me
i'm not sure if it's the topaz or it was just the render
but overall it's a nice sig

for me it is a bit chaotic but I like the effects ;)

lol no. imo topaz is starting to be overused on this site and is being misunderstood on how it should be used.
this sig would be so much nicer without imo.
it seems too busy and crowded and text is hard to read.
anyways its nice but it has several flaws. kiu though.

yes DR i know.. i kinda made this topaz to spite the amount of topaz being used on the site.

Not your best, Kritez.
There is too much topaz, which I don't know why people like.

Your focal, Green Lantern looks a bit distorted and I'm not a fan of the effects.
Sorry mate, just not feeling this.

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Originally Posted by Joey x

Not your best, Kritez.
There is too much topaz, which I don't know why people like.

Your focal, Green Lantern looks a bit distorted and I'm not a fan of the effects.
Sorry mate, just not feeling this.

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yes! and it is monotone (although it's green :D), even the txt is green :D it's cool that it's green but still it's not good for sig if it's monotone...

LS is just ok i don't fill it's on the right spot but OK...

and once more YES it's too overtopazed...

I fill it's kinda overcontrased on some spots.... txt is hmmm good for start but needs some work + it's to big

Depth is OK...
there is some nice flow but your focal is a bit to big also, + don't forget rules of third, your focal is centered wich is also (-) for the wow fill of tag .... and I would recomande you to make less width tags (have on mind that standard size is 385X150 so don't do spme pices that aren't in same proportion at all (I'm not saying u have to make them exactly propotional to that size but it cant be 385X150 is nerly = 400x285 :D) I hope u understand what i want to say) :)

But it's green so COOL...
It's Nice pice but you could re-open PSD and try to fix some things :)

Just Kip it UP :)