The Dominance War III

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/5...soconspada.png
cnc please

I think u got some great skils going on here,
but im not sure about the focalpoint, and u might wanna change the text.
Love the effects. gj :D

did you ask the artists permission before using his work in your sig?
for those that dont know the dominance war is a competition of concept art i think its held annually...
but anyways the CnC
ill keep it short..
bit messy cant really tell alot apart
some different colour would be nice

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Originally Posted by GFXDub

did you ask the artists permission before using his work in your sig?

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it was published on Planetrenders.net
so I think it is legal
=)

Its too dim right now for my taste. I really like the effects in the hand of the focal and I think you can do something with that IMO. If you made the lighting coming from that effect, increase the contrast in the BG, while directing the flow of the lighting towards the right side of the frame (not all the way, just tilt it a bit in that direction. That way you'll have some depth going on.

i started to work on it
http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/1...conspadav3.png

The second version is far better to me, the depth has really increased(though you might hsve oversharpened the render) and the lighting and text also improved.
Those were the main things I thought could use some work.