Devil Girl

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6979/devilgirl.png

http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/8342/devilgirl3.png

ty slave again for use of your renders hope i executed her as u had hoped ? cnc please ty

The render seems LQ, as well the entire BG. The contrast seems ugly with the harsh green, dithc black and red colors. The smudge isn't really fitting either and that goes for the focal too. Text needs to go. Not your best IMO but keep at it.

wow really :P hahaa harsh but tx for the cnc guess iw ill have another crack at it latter :)

I don't aim to thrash people's work. I hate it when people do that and get it mixed up with harsh or see it as "real CnC" Its silly. Just be direct but don't mean about it and give your own opinion on how to go about it. Jeff taught me that. So yeah, thats what I try to do. Wasn't trying to be a douchebag or anything of the sort.

it's cool m8 your not first to say it i just had another visual on it i will make something better with it was just messing about with new filters and such i hadn't used to make this thought had some nice texture but as u said maybe not for this tag or render :)

Its just an opinion mate. If you think you can fix it with something better than what I said, go ahead.

Cheers man. Keep at it.

I think the render is quite LQ too :/
The colours are very grungey, and i like that!
Although the texture seems a bit 'Blotchy'
I enjoy the idea bro, KIU :]

the render it self was kinda lq it self but maybe some layers i have over it but im still gonna try another bg theme all that is in the bg is small coppies of the focal it self and smudged in. like 15 times