Full Metal Alchemist Sig Cnc

Okay, i know, once again it is not the greatest, but. . .i did not follow any tut, i just combined techniques that i have learned, and i think it is pretty good. Any thoughts? The reason that the text is Giveaway is because it was for a giveaway on a diff. site. :D
http://i948.photobucket.com/albums/a.../Alchemist.png

your background isnt fully smudged or blended!, looks like you just got lazy and didnt want to finish it :/
The pink rope lookin thing is a little distracting too.
Everything else so far is looking pretty good to me, i would just make the necessary edits and you should have a decent tag :)

its not that the bg isnt smudged, it is a clipping mask splatter brush. but thanks! :D

good try bro, smudging looks great, and there is some dept to it which does make the render pop out. i would have liked to see your render blended into the BG more. Text needs some work. for placement, rule of thirds usually works great. as for font, it fits but i would have made it bold in your case. KIU

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Originally Posted by notthefed

good try bro, smudging looks great, and there is some dept to it which does make the render pop out. i would have liked to see your render blended into the BG more. Text needs some work. for placement, rule of thirds usually works great. as for font, it fits but i would have made it bold in your case. KIU

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thanks! i love good tips like this!

Looks rude, agree with the above, render will look fierce when its smudged into the bg!
I was say throw in a few C4D on screen, but thats IMO
Some glowing/lighting would go well to IMO
Looks great, good job dude :]

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Originally Posted by Mountford

Looks rude, agree with the above, render will look fierce when its smudged into the bg!
I was say throw in a few C4D on screen, but thats IMO
Some glowing/lighting would go well to IMO
Looks great, good job dude :]

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Lol, actually i have three c4ds in there, but their opacity is very low, and they are set to lighten, but yeah i will add some lighting into it tomorrow!

Basically what Andrew said. You could really use some blending with the render. And that thing is really distracting. Not bad though.

a decent but looks unfinished tag. maybe work on it a bit more, give it some finishing touches :D

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Originally Posted by emsee

a decent but looks unfinished tag. maybe work on it a bit more, give it some finishing touches :D

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Thats what im gonna do today!