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Please rate out of 10 and say which version you prefer:)
Oooh and any CnC would be appreciated :D
1:
http://i943.photobucket.com/albums/a...e/Starwars.png
2:
http://i943.photobucket.com/albums/a.../Starwars2.png
3:
http://i943.photobucket.com/albums/a.../Starwars3.png
Thanks!
the render is running towards us, but you made a flow coming from top left to bottom right.
it doesn't match with the render and makes the tag look strange.
nice effects, V1 has best depth!
These are pretty nice. I have a couple of suggestions for you though...
V1- [Rating: 4/10]
I am not a fan of this one... The fire that surrounds him is too overwhelming and the sharpness/lightning of the arm on the right side makes it hard to see. Also, your background is too blurred, as the earth looks incredibly out of focus. Now that I look at it, the whole thing is actually too blurred...
V2- [Rating: 5/10]
This one is pretty good, but I still do not like the way the arm on the right is not visable. Also try lighting the right side more because it goes from light to dark and doesnt look quite right.
V3- [Rating: 6-7/10]
This one is my favorite. I like the way you toned down the fire in this one but as in the previous ones, there is just something about the render's arm not being in focus... Maybe try using a soft pixel eraser brush set on 20% opacity and erase the edges of the render to blend it more.
Overall good work, and KIU
Thanks for all the CnC, I wasn't to sure how to get the flow to sort of come out of the sig, but I do know what you mean. And about the arm, I'm trying to fix it now :L
Mix 3 and 1, and you're going to have a much better sig. V1 has great depth but the blending is bad. V3 has no depth and the blending is better.
