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not too crazy about the color choices try changing that also eminem looks stretched are you using shift+click when your resizing your renders? keep improving!
I would just recommend brining the c4ds closer to the render, and there is also to much
Empty white space, the lightning is fine but it looks like its coming from no where.
The render is just plain in the middle i think it should be moved.
Keep going at it, you'll get better eventually.
maybe move the c4d over to the focal and flip it in the other direction like face like on one the right but in the but facing left so looks like a v and stock or focal in between then take lightning effect under it in between the c4ds . just a thought gl and kiu